1、 主语重复

　　常见形式：

　　(1)、名词+插入语/句+代词+谓语……{删除代词}

　　例句：2T1：But salespeople, typically the most……, they have traditionally been reward…..

　　2T2: The exception, however, it may be a little-known……

　　(2)、代词+ 名词+谓语…….{删除名词}

　　例句：3T1: This supply allows trainees to…….

　　2、 过去分词作后置定语，引导词多余 {删除引导词}

　　常见形式：

　　(1)、2T1:Team-based pay is more in line with the organization’s objectives than pay which based on individual achievement.

　　(2)、2T4：Data Facts Limited is an expanding management services company whose based in the north of England.

　　It will be necessary for those who appointed to work a certain number of evenings and weekends.

　　3、 介词乱用 {删除介词}

　　常见形式：

　　1、导致句意不符,文意不通

　　(1)、2T1:The biggest problem is for defining the team in the first place.

　　(2)、2T2:The individual learning account scheme is by the latest government scheme……

　　(3)、3T2：Regus centers can be found out in prominent

　　(4)、3T2：In addition to being fully furnished and equipped up

　　2、导致主语缺少，句子结构混乱

　　(1)、3T2：In each center contains a range of facilities, including serviced offices, meeting rooms, reception areas……

　　3、介词加于及物动词之后

　　update on your internet skills; involve in sth; resemble to sth; crash down sth; offer for; tip over; dominate on the…

　　4、不定式当目的状语，不用how引导 {删除how}

　　常见形式：

　　(1)、2T3: We focus on our strategy how to achieve market leadership.

　　(2)、3T4:The purpose of the campaign is how to reinforce our position …….

　　5 、词义重复 {删除多余单词}

　　常见形式：

　　Whole life-long learning; new change; sure success; three years time…….

　　6、固定搭配 {删除多余单词}

　　常见形式：

　　in the cake decorating=in doing sth

　　provide with both leadership and …….provide sth to sb=provide sb with sth

　　go on through a questionnaire(go on 继续做 go through 执行)

　　doing the business 经商

　　take up a look at 看一看

　　have done an affiliation with 与….有联系，与….有从属关系

　　take into your account 考虑到

　　still further on进一步

　　under the pressure 在压力之下

　　7、动词重复/多余

　　need appoint (need to do sth/need sth)

　　will have report directly

　　will make maximize the…..

　　8、双谓语 {删除多余谓语}

　　But take a good on-site training courses can include …….

　　Work seems like to take over a disproportionate part of our lives

　　It’s more important to make use that time well than to work more hours.

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