【高分句型一】

　　I am writing to invite you to take part in the meaningful lecture. 我写信是想邀请你参加这个有意义的演讲。这里invite sb. to do sth. 表示邀请某人做某事。

　　【高分句型二】

　　If there is anything that I can do, please let me know. 如果有什么我能做的，请告诉我。这里let sb. do sth. 表示让某人做某事。

　　题目②

　　It’s one of our traditional virtues to be thrifty. Being thrifty is a good virtue which has been passed down from generation to generation. It’s a good idea to start on in our daily life.

　　First of all, I constantly check the lights and the taps to make sure that they are off when leaving the house. Besides, never have I wasted any food. What’s more, I don’t spend too much money on unnecessary things and save money regularly.

　　The reason why I do so is that I want to make a difference to my life. As the old saying goes, " Waste not, want not." I make up my mind to be thrifty as much as possible. I think everyone should take actions to stick to this virtue.

　　【名师点评】

　　本文体裁属于议论文，话题是"节约是美德"，难度等级属于中上，是常见的中考作文话题之一。本文需要考生写出生活中是如何提倡节约，杜绝浪费的。具体应从两个方面去写：一、在日常生活中你都做了什么?二、你为什么要这样做?仔细阅读文中所给提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确有哪些要点。根据要表达的内容确定本文应以第一人称去写，描述的是日常生活中如何节约的，时态应为一般现在时。写作时应注意上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，层次清楚。

　　本文是一篇优秀的作文，围绕主题展开论述且包含所有内容要点;上下文意思连贯，层次清楚，用词准确、句子通顺、行文连贯。首先第一段直奔主题，提出"节约是美德"，运用定语从句阐述了节约是中华民族的传统美德，以此说明节约的重要性，Being thrifty is a good virtue which has been passed down from generation to generation. 接着号召大家在日常生活中要从自身做起。It’s a good idea to start on in our daily life. 接着，在第二段中介绍了平常是如何做的，采用三个连词First of all, Besides，What’s more，清楚地举例介绍了自己生活中节约的三件小事，"检查是否关灯和水龙头，不浪费食物，不乱花钱。"最后一段，说明这样做的原因，用句型"The reason why I do so is that I want to make a difference to my life."总述原因，观点明确。还能引用谚语As the old saying goes, " Waste not, want not." 为文章添彩。

　　3、2017年

　　文段表达

　　题目①

　　假如你是李华，正在美国参加一个交换生项目。今天下午你应邀和朋友Jim 一家外出，请用英语给接待家庭的妈妈Mrs. Smith 写一个留言条，告诉她你们要去哪里，去做什么，以及你回家的时间和方式。

　　提示词语：park, movie theater, go boating, watch a movie

　　提示问题：Where are you going?

　　What are you going to do?

　　When and how will you get home?

　　Dear Mrs. Smith,

　　My friend Jim asks me to go out with his family this afternoon.

　　Yours,

　　Li Hua

　　题目②

　　宽容是一种美德。人与人之间难免会有磕磕绊绊。面对矛盾，多一份包容和谅解，生活就会多一缕阳光。

　　某英文网站正在开展以"包容、谅解"为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈生活中你原谅他人的一次经历，主要内容包括：你们之间发生了什么，你为什么原谅对方，以及原谅对方之后的感受。

　　提示词语：hurt, realize, forgive(原谅), happy

　　提示问题：What happened between you and him/her?

　　Why did you decide to forgive him/her?

　　How did you feel after forgiving him/her?

　　I still remember what happened between

　　考题解析

　　2017年北京中考作文与2016年相比，在考试形式上没有什么特殊的变化，还是二选一，学生选择其中一题完成任务的考试形式。都是围绕着一个主题，根据题目提供的信息，提示词和两个问句进行内容的写作。话题仍贴近学生的实际生活，让学生有话可说。第一个题目更强调对语言的实际应用能力;第二个话题相对较难，考查学生的思想深度和语言能力，突出社会主义核心价值观。

　　题目①

　　Dear Mrs. Smith,

　　My friend Jim asks me to go out with his family this afternoon. I am writing to tell you that we will meet in the park. Then we will go to the movie theater to watch a movie. Finally, we are going to go boating in the lake. Don’t worry about me. We will be back at 6:00 p.m. Jim’s father will send me home by taxi. I am sure to have a lot of fun. Waiting for my back.

　　Yours,

　　Li Hua

　　【名师点评】

　　这是一篇应用文，写一篇留言条。也是一篇材料作文，给出了一些材料，并给出了一些提示单词和提示问题。我们要根据提示材料和问题(Where are you going?What are you going to do?When and how will you get home?)用正确的英语把要点表达出来，用上所给单词，并适当发挥想象。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不要遗漏要点。根据材料内容可知本文主要是用一般将来时来写。首先，回答 “Where are you going?” 要明确写出外出的地点。然后回答“What are you going to do?”具体写出我们到达外出地之后所进行的活动。接着回答“When and how will you get home?”需要写出回家的方式和到家的时间。最后，写希望家里的妈妈不要为我担心。写作中要适当使用连词，注意叙述的顺序，要符合逻辑关系。

　　【写作亮点】

　　这篇短文语句通顺，表达准确。学习中注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语,特别适用了表示先后顺序的词Then，Finally,使表达具有条里性，句式Don’t worry about me. .I am sure to等的使用，更增加了文章的色彩，此文表达具有逻辑性,，有条理。

　　题目②

　　I still remember what happened between me and Tom. Yesterday, I had a fight with my friend Tom. He took away my pen without my agreement. My father bought it for me last year, and I like it very much. His behavior hurt me. I was very angry. For his sorry, he wrote a card:"Sorry, please forgive me". He felt ashamed for what he did. At last I realized that I was too stingy. I choose to forgive him. He was very happy for my forgiveness. I was very happy, too. Through this matter, we became good friends.

　　As the Chinese old saying goes"To err is human". In our whole long life, I believe, nobody can make no mistakes. Children may broke bowls, students may cheat or do something against the teacher, and grown-ups may do something wrong on their work or even something against the law. Keeping something unpleasant in mind does no good to us. Letting the unhappy matters go brings happiness and pleasure back to our life.

　　【名师点评】

　　本文属于话题类作文，话题是“包容、谅解”。主要关于个人经历的，需要考生写出谅解他人的经历，具体内容围绕以下三个方面：1.你们之间发生了什么事?2.你为什么决定原谅他(她)?3.谈谈你原谅他(她)之后的感受。仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确有哪些要点。考生需要从三个方面作答，指出原谅对方的一件事情，原谅的原因以及原谅之后的感受。根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态;语言表达要符合英语习惯。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。

　　【亮点说明】

　　这是一篇比较优秀的作文，本文很好地完成了试题规定的任务。覆盖所有内容要点;语言表达要符合英语习惯，准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，用词准确、句子通顺、行文连贯。首先指出原谅的对象，“I still remember what happened between me and Tom.”

　　接着详细描述发生的事情，先指出矛盾点，“Yesterday ,I had a fight with my friend Tom. He took away my pen without my agreement…” 然后，描述转折点，是他认识了错误，给我道歉For his sorry, he wrote a card:” Sorry, please forgive me”. He felt ashamed for what he do. 事情发展的最后，我原谅了朋友并拥抱和好，“I choose to forgive him. He was very happy for my forgiveness. I was very happy, too. Through this matter, we became good friends..”最后描述自己的感悟As the Chinese old saying … Letting the unhappy matters go brings happiness and pleasure back to our life.