2、2018年

　　文段表达

　　你是英语校报编辑李华。校报收到初一新生Ben的来信，他提出了所面临的两个问题。请你根据以下提示写一封回信，说明Ben的问题，提出你的建议并陈述理由。

　　注意：(1)回信应包括所有要点;

　　(2)词数80左右(信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入词数)

　　(3)不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。

　　Dear Ben,

　　I am sorry to hear that you are having trouble getting used to life in middle school. In your letter you said that

　　Good luck with everything!

　　Li Hua

　　考题解析

　　2018年广州中考英语书面表达话题为针对人际关系及英语学习问题的建议信，建议信这个体裁近年比较少出现，但却是九年级上学期的重点。要写好这篇文章，关键是把握文章整体结构，及各个要点之间的逻辑衔接。2018年广州中考英语书面表达，近十年内第二次出现以回信形式的写作，描述初一新生Ben在学习和生活上遇到的问题，并给出建议和理由。话题与课本九年级上册Unit 4 Problems and Advice吻合，再一次体现回归课本的重要性。另外，话题贴近学生生活实际，代入感较强。

　　与往年不同的是，今年是根据两个不同的问题再分别补充建议，强调在核心素养背景下学生解决问题的能力;同时需要学生发散思维，在语言表达的空间上创设性较大，凸显难度。最后学生在陈述理由时，还需注意审题，把握建议与理由之间的逻辑关系。另外，学生在写作时需要注意人称与时态。

　　满分范文

　　Dear Ben,

　　I am sorry to hear that you are having trouble getting used to life in middle school. In your letter you said that you felt lonely because you had few friends. To solve this problem, I advise you to take part in school clubs to make more friends. What’s more, you can join some study groups where you can not only acquire knowledge, but also make more friends.

　　You also said that you had difficulty in remembering English words. I think it is a good way to learn words by reading more English stories and news. In additions, you should try your best to speak English in daily life. Day by day, you will remember a lot of words and make some progress.

　　Good luck with everything!

　　Li Hua

　　【名师点评】

　　2018年广州中考英语作文的体裁是书信类应用文，本文要求写一封回信，说明Ben的问题，提出你的建议并陈述理由，根据表格中的信息可知，应根据两个不同的问题再分别补充建议。在写作时，要注意审题，适当发挥，逻辑思路清晰，语句通顺。根据书信内容可知，本文人称为第一人称，提到Ben时，用第二人称。表达建议，时态为一般现在时。

　　本文第一段直接说明Ben的第一个问题，朋友少，感觉孤独，In your letter you said that you felt lonely because you had few friends. 并紧随其后给出解决方法，To solve this problem, I advise you to take part in school clubs to make more friends. What’s more, you can join some study groups where you can not only acquire knowledge, but also make more friends.运用目的状语从句，给出建议，思路清晰，上下文过渡自然。Not only ...but also体现了对中考考纲词汇的灵活运用。

　　第二段介绍了Ben的第二个问题，英语单词难记You also said that you had difficulty in remembering English words.给出自己的建议， I think it is a good way to learn words by reading more English stories and news. In additions, you should try your best to speak English in daily life. Day by day, you will remember a lot of words and make some progress.运用固定句型It is +形容词+to do的句型给出合理建议，语气诚恳，第三段表达祝愿，Good luck with everything!