第五篇：

　　【写作要求】

　　学校英语社团在举办征文比赛，请你根据以下提示内容，写一篇题为“The Person Who Has Influenced Me Most”的英语文章。内容要点如下：

　　1. 对我影响最大的人是我的妈妈，她四十几岁；

　　2. 她总是耐心倾听我的问题，并建议我如何解决它们；

　　3. 作为一名医生，她常说再怎么仔细也不为过。她总是加班，把她的大部分时

　　间都奉献给了工作；

　　4. 所以，我认为她不仅是位好妈妈，也是名好医生。

　　5. 我希望 ……

　　要求：1. 内容须包含所有要点，语句通顺，意思连贯；

　　2. 词数90个左右；

　　3. 第5点的内容需展开合理想象，用2-3句话补充完整。

　　【优秀满分范文】

　　The Person Who Has Influenced Me Most

　　My mother is the person who has influenced me most. 

　　She is in her forties. She always listens to my problems patiently. And she advises me how to solve them. As a doctor, she often says she can’t be too careful. She often works extra hours. She has devoted most of her time to her work. So I think she is not only a good mother but also a good doctor. 

　　I hope I can be a person like her. I also hope she will pay more attention to her own health. She’d better have more time to relax herself. 

　　第六篇：

　　【写作要求】

　　假设不久前你们学校为贫困地区的孩子们筹款举办了一次慈善行活动。请据此在制定的位置上，以“Walk for children in poor areas”为题，为某中学生英文报写一篇报道，内容要点如下：

　　1. 目的：为贫困地区的孩子们筹款

　　2. 10月23日，星期六

　　3. 路径：学校—市中心

　　4. 简况：学生把自己分成四人一组，出发前计划好了一切，步行很艰辛，但活动过程中大家互相帮助，互相支持。最终在许多人的帮助下，筹得善款5万多元。

　　5. 感受：每个人都很累，但都很高兴，因为…

　　注意：1. 报道须包括所给内容要点，要求语句通顺，意思连贯；

　　2. 第5要点的内容须用至少2句话展开合理想象，作适当发挥；

　　3. 词数80个左右。

　　【优秀满分范文】

　　Walk for children in poor areas 

　　Not long ago, our school organized a charity walk to raise money for children in poor areas.

　　It was on Saturday, 23 rd October. We walked from the school to the centre of the city. Before the walk, we grouped ourselves into a team of four and planned everything well. It was a hard (tough) work. But during the walk, we supported and helped each other. With the help of many people, we raised over (more than) 50,000 yuan in the end. 

　　We all felt tired, but we were very happy. Because it was a meaningful experience and it was an excellent chance to learn team spirit.