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No.1 Young people today have more chances to improve the world than young people in the past.
波波点睛:
题目大意为: 与过去的年轻人相比,现在的年轻人有更多的机会去改善世界。此题是一道典型的古今对比题目,波波建议选择同意,理由如下: 1.年轻人本身素质的提高 2.社会制度的完善和科学技术的进步。
具体思路如下:
主题句一:
To begin with, with the improvement of educational level, young generation today are more capable to make the world better.
解释:
The obvious reason underlying the above statement is that better education one receives usually means higher quality he has. As we kno, college education plays a crucial role in helping young people cultivate various abilities including social skills, leaderships and foreign language skills, which enable them to better improve the world. With the popularization of higher education, an increasing number of young people obtain the opportunity to attend college and university. According to the surveys polling 1000 people aged from 20 to 30 conducted by Ministry of Education in 1995 and in 2005, nearly 60 percents of the surveyed in 2005 were bachelor degree holders while the figure in 1995 was less than 15%. These two figures has clearly shown that the educational level of young people has improved a lot, which greatly enhance their capabilities of bettering the world.
主题句二:
Secondly, young people today have more opportunities to make the world better than their counterparts in the past due to the improvements of social system as well as the development of science and technology.
解释:
In the past, under the tyranny social system, young people born in the ordinary families had no chances to change the world. However, with democracy becoming the theme of social system, every citizen including the young have an equal chance to improve the world. For example, many young people have the chance to engage in a variety of worldwide voluntary relief activities, which was totally impossible for young people in the past. What's more, the advent of communication technologies such as internet makes young people more accessible to the events happening in the world and thus make a say. However, in the past young people couldn't get to know what was happening in the world and let alone improve the world.
No. 2 Some agriculture methods damage the environment, but providing the food for the increasing number of population is more important than protecting the environment.
波波点睛:
题目大意为:有些农业生产方式会危害环境,但是为日益增长的人口提供食物比保护环境更加重要。此题目为对比类题目,选择任何一个都会发现很难找到两个支持的理由,所以波波建议选择主观点是取决于,即认为提供粮食是否比保护环境更重要取决于国家的发展状况。
具体思路如下:
主题句一:
On the one hand, supplying sufficient food to the increasing population is more important for the developing countries.
解释:
As is common sense, the ample food supply contributes to the stability of the whole society by meeting the basic need of the public.Confucius, one of the greatest philosophers and educators in ancient China, once remarked that the top priority for people is food, which clearly illustrates the significant role played by adequate food in keeping the whole society in order. What is happening in Africa is a good case in point. Due to the shortage of food, people in Africa are on the verge of starvation and many children suffer from malnutrition. Consequently, in order to gain food, local people are more likely to have conflicts with others and thus the whole society is reduced into chaos. According to the survey conducted by the UN, millions of African residents die of starvation or fighting for food per year. As we know, the pesticides will defend the crops from insects and fertilizers can improve the harvest. Therefore, it is necessary to guarantee the food supply by employing various agricultural methods for the sake of maintaining social stability in those less developed nations.
主题句二:
On the other hand, protecting environment is more significant for the developed countries, because people in these countries place more emphasis on health than on food.
解释:
Without any doubt, a clean environment is the precondition for people to live a healthy life. To illustrate, as long as we live on the earth, the water we drink, the air we breathe and the food we eat have a close relation to our health. However, the chemicals used in farming have contaminated the soil and even the water. Also, the residues of the pesticides on the fruits or vegetables may be also taken in, which will eventually make people suffer from various disease. In this case, the government of developed countries should enact laws to restrict the use of poisonous chemicals, in order to avoid the consequence that the health of our human beings will be threatened seriously.
结尾:
Judging from the above discussion, it depends on the development stage of the country whether adequate food supply for the public is of greater importance than environmental protection. To be more specific, the developed countries should give priority to protecting environment because the people in these countries want to lead a higher quality life in a clean environment. However, as for undeveloped countries, guaranteeing food supply is more important because the public there are confronted with the threat of starvation.
No.3
A leader should admit if he made a bad decision.
波波点睛:
题目大意: 领导做出错误决定时,应该承认。此题目单纯想why,并不好想,所以波波建议采取采用who的思考角度。波波推荐选择同意,分别对领导自身好和对整个团队好。
具体思路如下:
主题句一:
对领导好,因为可以体现个人的人格魅力,获得更多的信任。相反,如果一意孤行,只会让人觉得你固执。
Initially, the leaders themselves will be a beneficiary of acknowledging the bad decisions made by them, because this practice can reflect the charisma of leaders.
解释:
Just as an old proverb goes, to err is a man, which means that it is impossible for anyone, regardless his or her position or age, to make no mistakes. Undoubtedly, admitting the poor decision is never easy so that those who can face up to the bad decision are likely earn more trusts and understanding from the group members and thus can achieve further advances in career. On the contrary, insisting on the wrong decision and brazening on will make leaders lose his authority in front of team members, thus posing some obstacles to the career of leaders. Take the experience of my brother, an employee in an internet company, as an example. Last year, the CEO of my brother's company recruited a young guy, Joe, to be the manager of marketing department. From the very beginning, the CEO was convinced that Joe was great for the business. As time went by, he was proven to be a terrible manager because he was irresponsible with company funds and had alienated nearly all of his peers on the senior team. Throughout, the CEO continued to support him and to refuse to listen to negative feedback about Joe. The sad ending of the story is that the CEO ended up losing his job, so did Joe.
主题句二:
为员工树立良好的榜样,在犯错时及时纠正,减少公司的损失。
In addition, leaders who acknowledge that they are heading on a wrong directions will set a good role model for the members of team, thus creating a positive vibe in the whole team.
解释:
As is common sense, the behaviors and deeds of a leader have a profound impact on every member in a team. In other words, adimission of poor decision-making by leaders may encourage team members to face up to the mistaken decisions and quickly find a remedy for it, thus improving the work efficiency of the whole team. By contrast, if leaders tend to find endless excuses to explain the poor decision, the group members may follow suit. Gradually, the cohesiveness and competitivenss of the whole team will collapse at last.
No.4
Because modern life is complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize.
agree:
波波点睛:
题目大意: 因为现代生活复杂,所以对于年轻人来说有组织计划能力是很重要的。此题目读完之后,大家会发现这是一句有道理的"废话",对于这样的题目很难去反驳,所以只好同意,然后去思考分论点,想原因也不好想,建议用拆分举例,即:对young people 拆分为学生和工作中的年轻人都很重要。
主题句一:
To begin with, it is undeniable that students today should acquire the ability of planning and organizing.
解释:
Planning study time and holding various activities can serve as two compelling examples to shed light on this viewpoint. For one thing, students today are confronted with a heavier study burden than their counterparts in the past. To be specific, at present senior high school students are required to take numerous courses including math, biology, chemistry, physics and so on, which will keep them busy all the time. Given their limited energy and time, they have to be able to make a reasonable time schedule in order to make best use of time and improve study efficiency. As for the ability to organize, besides excelling at their majors, college students are responsible for holding various activities in campus. For example, in the process of preparing for a welcome party, students must be capable to allocate all the tasks to members according to their talents. The extroverted team members should be asked to negotiate with the sponsors of the whole party while the meticulous ones should be assigned the task of purchasing the stuff needed in the party. Therefore, holding a successful activity is closely related to the organizing ability.
主题句二:
In addition, it is also indisputable that young people in the working environment should be capable of planning and organizing in order to climb the corporate ladder more smoothly.
解释:
Career planning and meeting organization can effectively illustrate the above point. After entering the working environment, the new employees will be immersed in the overwhelming tasks in their work so that confusion and frustration will occur to them. Making a clear career plan will free us from the worries and puzzles at the beginning of work. Besides, as is known to all, various meetings are a common and effective way to solve problems in a company, large or small. The young employee who can organize the meeting procedures well can earn the favor of the boss and thus get promoted.
No.5
People can make friends with a guy who has more money.
波波点睛:
题目大意:人们可以和很有钱的人成为朋友。此题暗含一个前提,即财富差距会导致友谊不能建立。波波建议,选择同意,分论点如下:
主题句一:友谊建立的基础是互相尊重和了解,不是物质所决定的。
First of all, mutual respect and understanding establishes the foundation of friendship.
解释:
In other words, people with different financial background can become friends as long as they respect and appreciate each other. There are numerous examples that can be cited to support my point. A good case in point is the friendship between Marx and Engel. As is known to all, Marx was quite poor back then while Enges has plentiful fortune. The great gap in financial situation never obstructed the formation of their solid friendship. Engises appreciated Max's talent in writing and far-sightedness of his thoughts and generously funded Max to publish his books. Meanwhile, Max had a high regard for Enges. Therefore, the flower of friendship blossoms in the ground of mutual respect.
主题句二:
Secondly, making friends with rich people can benefit us in many ways.
解释:
Just as an old proverb goes, a friend in need is a friend indeed. Let's imagine that in the process of running a company, you come across the financial problems. Those wealthy friends will be able to offer you a hand and help you through hard times. Besides, making friends with rich people enable us to enlarge our social circle and may broaden our horizon to some extent. Take my own experience as an example. My best friend, Tony, from a well-off family invited me to enjoy a famous concert, which gave me an extraordinary spiritual experience. After this concert, I became crazy about classic music and then I chose it as my major in college.
让步结尾:
Those opponents of the statement that people can make friends with more money may claim that the disparity in financial resources is more likely to cause misunderstanding. The rationale underlying this claim is that rich people are likely to feel superior to others while the poor probably hold prejudice to wealthy people. Admittedly, there is some truth about this claim. However, compared with the great influence of mutual respect in forming friendship, the negative effect caused by difference in possessions can be ignored.
No.6
The way a person is dressed in is a good indication of his/her personality.
波波点睛:
题目大意:人们穿衣的方式能否反应他们的性格。 此题目有些抽象,波波建议大家选择不同意,即认为穿衣风格和性格没有关系,而是主要取决于场合和心情。
具体思路如下:
论证段一:
主题句:穿衣的风格会因为场合的不同而变化,所以很难看出一个人的性格。
In the first place, the way people dress may change in order to fit in different occasions, from which we cannot tell their personalities.
论据:不同场合下,我们需要穿不同的衣服。具体来说,在公司,员工通常会被要求穿上相同的制服,所以他们的个性很难从衣服上来辨别。在学校里也是如此。
As is common sense, in our daily life it is quite normal that we have to change our outfits according to the varying occasions we are under. To be specific, in the workplace, almost every company requires their employees to wear certain specific uniform, say, the formal suit for the sake of leaving a good impression on its potential clients. In this case, no matter what personability you have, it is not easy to tell by just seeing the same uniform you are in. The same logic can apply to the school students. According to a 2015 survey conducted by the magazine titled The Youth about the requirement of what students wear in 100 high schools and junior schools, nearly 90% of the surveyed schools set up strict rules about how to dress for their students, which indicates that any individual's personalities cannot be revealed by their outfit.
论证段二:
主题句:一个人的心情会同样会让人们改变穿衣的风格,这也会让通过衣服来看一个的性格变得很难。
In the second place, the style of dressing also may be influenced by the mood a person possesses instead of by personalities.
论据:心情或情绪会极大的影响一个人的行为,包括穿什么衣服或如何去搭配衣服。比如用自身的例子来证明,在心情好的时候,穿正装体现出积极正面的形象,相反心情不好,会改变成另一种形象。
Bobision Jackson, a distinguished psychologist in Boston University, proposed that our emotional state plays a decisive role in determing our actions and behaviors, including what we wear and how we are dressed. My own experience can shed some lights on the above proposal. When stressed out because of the countless deadlines of papers and projects, I feel gloomy and depressed and then I would like to dress some casual clothes, especially sportswear and T shirts. Such a style of dressing can make me feel more comfortable, thus relieving my pressure to some extent. However, in my delightful and cheerful days, I am inclined to put on the llittle black dress and step into my shiny Oxford shoes, creating a postive image in front of others. In this case, the way people are dressed will send wrong information about their personalities.
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