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There are many programs and media that can help educate younger people. 很多媒体可以用来教育年轻人。 【如何教育年轻人?指出具体方式可以更紧密联系其主体段分论点。】 There are many programs and media that can help educate younger people in an engaging way and help them get interested in learning outside school and in the world around them. 很多媒体可以用来教育年轻人,能够让年轻人非常投入并且让他们爱上课外学习。 |
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She researches and chooses programs carefully. 她很仔细地研究选择(电视)节目。 【选择的依据标准是什么?列出标准可以使例子更相关更有说服力。】 She researches and chooses programs carefully, ensuring that there is an educational benefit, but that the programs are alsofun. 她很仔细地研究选择(电视)节目,确保它们有教育价值,同时又很有趣。 |
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The children often tell me about what they learned, and they are clearly engaged in the programs. 孩子们经常告诉我他们学到了什么,显然他们看这些节目看得很认真。 【是不是父母给他们压力才看的?强调孩子们自愿看这些节目,可以突出这些节目作为教育 手段的趣味性。】 The children often tell me about what they learned, and they are clearly engaged in the programs despite not beingforced to watch them. 孩子们经常告诉我他们学到了什么,显然他们看这些节目看得很认真,哪怕没人逼着他们去看。 |
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This has had a clear effect on their behavior, and they are actively interested in bugs and animals. 这对他们的行为有很明显的影响,让他们对虫子和动物很感兴趣。 【别的孩子如何对待虫子和动物的呢?通过对比 ,更加突出媒体对他们的作用。】 This has had a clear effect on their behavior, and they are actively interested in bugs and animals that other children mayjust kill. 这对他们的行为有很明显的影响,让他们对虫子和动物很感兴趣,而别的孩子一般只会弄死它们。 |
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I believe that this can help stimulate some younger people's imagination and creativity. 我相信这可以激发一些年轻人的想象力和创意。 【对哪些年轻人更有效?通过强调“视觉敏感”,可以让读者更加认可作者的观点。】 I believe that this can help stimulate some younger people's imagination and creativity, particularly those who respond more to visual information . 我相信这可以激发一些年轻人的想象力和创意,特别是对视觉信息比较敏感的人。 |
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Science fiction was my favorite genre, and I used to copy the landscapes and characters. 科幻电影是我最爱的类型,我曾经模仿那些风景和人物。 【哪里来的风景和人物?指出这些风景和人物来自于最爱的电影和游戏可以直接点题:年轻人可以从媒体中学到创意。】 Science fiction was my favorite genre, and I used to copy the landscapes and characters I saw in myfavorite films and games. 科幻电影是我最爱的类型,我曾经模仿那些我从喜爱的电影和游戏中看到的风景和人物。 |