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6. 替换表达
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7. 扩展句子
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To begin with, the world is competitive, which means parents are often concerned about their children's future in this environment. 首先,世界竞争激烈,这意味着在这个环境下,父母通常关心孩子的未来。 【现在是否比过去竞争更激烈? 父母对孩子未来的关心程度是否增加?加入对比可以更好地扣 题。】 To begin with, the world is more competitive than in the past, which means parents are often more concerned about their children's future in this environment. 首先,世界变得比过去竞争更激烈,这意味着在这个环境下,父母通常更关心孩子的未来。 |
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In consequence, the parents can be more eager to make decisions for their children. 因此,父母更渴望帮孩子做决定。 【为什么要帮孩子做决定?想要更扣题的话 ,可以指出帮忙做决定是为了让孩子更有竞争力。】 In consequence, the parents can be more eager to make decisions for their children in order to maintain a more competitive edge for them. 因此,父母更渴望帮助孩子做决定,这样能让他们获得更多的竞争优势。 |
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They explained that studying music would not offer the stable career prospects. 他们解释说学音乐不会给他提供稳定的职业前景。 【哪些专业能够提供稳定的职业前景?加入细节可以使上下文更连贯。】 They explained that studying music would not offer the stable career prospects that studying law would open upfor him . 他们解释说学音乐不会像学习法律那样给他提供稳定的职业前景。 |
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Compared with modern day families, families in the past were usually bigger. 和现在的家庭相比,过去的家庭规模往往更大。 【现在家庭里通常有几个孩子?过去和现在相差得多吗?加入细节可以更好地体现对比。】 Compared with modern day families with only one or two children, families in the past were usually far bigger. 和现在只有一两个孩子的家庭相比,过去的家庭规模往往大得多。 |
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On the other hand, more attention can lead to an over reliance by the children on their parents. 另一方面,更多的关注会导致孩子对父母的过度依赖。 【关注是给到每一个孩子还是一群孩子?想突显现在和过去对比,以更好扣题的话,可以指出是 现在每个孩子得到的关注更多了。】 On the other hand, more attention being given to each child these days can lead to an over reliance by the children on their parents. Parents often help them survive in a more competitive world.. 父母通常帮助他们在一个竞争更激烈的世界中生存。 【如何帮助?想要更好地概括分论点 , 可以加入细节如父母干预孩子的生活。】 Parents often intervene in their children's lives in order to help them survive in a more competitive world. 父母通常干预孩子的生活, 以帮助他们在一个竞争更激烈的世界中生存。 另一方面,如今每个孩子获得的更多的关注会导致孩子对父母过度依赖。 |
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Parents often help them survive in a more competitive world.. 父母通常帮助他们在一个竞争更激烈的世界中生存。 【如何帮助?想要更好地概括分论点 , 可以加入细节如父母干预孩子的生活。】 Parents often intervene in their children's lives in order to help them survive in a more competitive world. 父母通常干预孩子的生活, 以帮助他们在一个竞争更激烈的世界中生存。 |